Comments on: Gameheadz http://ebeste.umwblogs.org/2007/09/02/gameheadz/ Just another UMW Blogs.org weblog Wed, 23 Jul 2008 19:23:24 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3.3 By: polack http://ebeste.umwblogs.org/2007/09/02/gameheadz/#comment-3 polack Wed, 05 Sep 2007 16:54:20 +0000 http://ebeste.umwblogs.org/2007/09/02/gameheadz/#comment-3 Great analysis of the video. I have another video that I will show that talks more about recent games. Don't over use "very" for example in your first sentence you use it twice. The first use is fine but the second use does not any meaning to the sentence and actually makes it awkward. Great analysis of the video. I have another video that I will show that talks more about recent games.

Don’t over use “very” for example in your first sentence you use it twice. The first use is fine but the second use does not any meaning to the sentence and actually makes it awkward.

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